Still cleaner. Forgive the pixel alignments, I did this on my phone.
This is a great animated gif of the data to ink ratio
I’d go so far to say focus on information:ink ratio. In any case, it fails at the very end by plotting values on the chart. No! No! No!
If you need that resolution use a table and save me the flamboyance. We are looking for patterns. Also, put those bars closer together. Start the Y at 0 and indicate the range - my brain will fill in the blanks.